Explain how does John appeal to the heart and mind? What do you think? What point or points are you trying to make?
o (3) Support. You need to back up your argument/what you think, logically, and by referring to the material you’re covering.
Do not summarize; 75% of the paper needs to be your discussion, your interpretation.
. Capitalize religious texts, such as “Bible.”
. A religion, which is singular, can’t be followed by “they,” a plural. For example, “In Christianity they believe” à “Christians believe.” BTW, be careful of sweeping, general statements like these. Be more specific.
. Paragraphs need transitions.
. You need to give source and page number for every quote or paraphrase; if it’s from our text, just use page number. Like this: “blah blah blah” (85).
8. Avoid whenever possible the passive voice. Use active, strong verbs.